In the Valley of the Drums, Chapter 2

m/m - slime - tentacles - mind control

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Author's Notes: Something interesting happened when I started writing out what wound up becoming the first chapter of this story. That would of course be this, the second chapter. I mentioned in the commentary of the first chapter that this entire idea for a story just sorta popped into my head the moment I looked at the drawing of Viscosisaurus surprising the viewer at the chemical dumping ground. Literally this entire thing, almost scene for scene, just appeared in a snap. There were some basic things I wanted to do with the story and my plans were to just make it an open and shut standalone thing, but the more I refined and expanded upon the scenes the more I wanted to just add more stuff to it and see how far I could stretch this idea.

This second chapter contains what was going to be the ending of the story when it was just meant to be a one shot submission. However it goes beyond that point because I decided I wanted to continue the story and take this idea into some stranger places.


Several days had passed and Dave was now back at his apartment on one of his days off from the car shop. He wound up spending the night in jail and his car was impounded, presumably because he told the police it wouldn't start, but he paid the fine to get his vehicle from the lot and sure enough it started on the first try because there was nothing wrong with it in the first place. He was let go with a citation to appear in court after a few weeks wherein he was told that he'd most likely be responsible for paying a fine for misdemeanor trespassing as well as footing the bill from the city who was sending a small crew to clean up all the beer bottles from the property. All in all, Dave rationalized that a temporary financial setback was a more desirable outcome than actually having to do time behind bars again. Aside from Dave's run in with the law, his friends were also amazed that he was even still alive because the way Nate told the story he made it sound like Dave was dead meat.

It was getting late so Dave decided to start getting cleaned up for the night and began with stripping down to take a shower. The allosaur let out a pleasant sigh as he turned on the spigot and a drizzle of cool water hit the top of his head and ran down his scaly body. He stood there for a few moments just relaxing as the hot water slowly kicked in and brought the temperature of the shower up to a comfortable warmth. He lathered up with soap and began washing himself all over, though when he reached his crotch he shuddered a bit as he noticed he felt a little more sensitive than usual. The dinosaur idly stroked his flaccid cock a few times realizing he hadn't actually done anything sexual since that night at the chemical plant. He ran his hand down to his balls and massaged them slightly, moaning under his breath. Strangely, he swore they felt a little bigger, heavier even.

As he reached full arousal Dave found himself feeling extremely pent up, with an overwhelming need to release. He brought his attention back to his manhood and started stroking his length in a more purposeful manner. The allosaur rumbled pleasurably and softly bit his lower lip as the climax he was chasing drew ever nearer until with a sharp gasp and audible moan he cracked and reached that peak. Dave leaned back against the wall of the shower stall and let the soothing water wash over him as he continued to stroke himself off through his orgasm, but moments into it the dinosaur realized something wasn't right; his cock was pulsing and throbbing in climax but nothing was coming out of it. His balls churned and tightened up but released nothing, and as he slowly came down from his high Dave realized that feeling of needing to release and take the edge off was still as intense as ever if not potentially worse.

Confused, Dave immediately started feeling himself over to see if there was something wrong with him but found nothing unusual.

He tried to ignore what had happened but as the night went on all he could think about was his desire to quell this need. Unable to focus on the television Dave roused himself from the couch and dug through the very back of the drawer of video tapes in his entertainment center and pulled out one of them. He stuck it into the VCR and sat back on the couch as it started playing. The picture on the TV changed over to a shot of a topless petite yellow velociraptor very casually sucking on the cock of a well built rex. Dave reclined back into the cushions of his couch and began pleasuring himself again as he eagerly watched his favorite adult film star play her role. The allosaur had gradually picked up his pace as he watched the video, the raptor on the tape now laying on her back as the rex towered over her and pounded into her slit. The rex let out a gruff moan as he quickly withdrew from her and finished himself off, his cock launching rope after rope of cum onto the woman's breasts and navel. The sight drove Dave wild and he reached his peak again. He wanted nothing more than to shoot out a thick load just like the rex but just like last time his manhood convulsed and his balls throbbed and churned but nothing came out.

Frustrated, Dave shut off the VCR and did his best to not focus on his dysfunction. He laid in bed for hours unable to fall asleep but at some point managed to do so because he awoke to the grating digital alarm of his bedside clock. He pulled himself out of bed, got dressed, and got ready to go to work. Intrusive thoughts of sex plagued the allosaur's mind to the point where he started messing up on simple things like switching caps on things under the hoods of cars because he wasn't paying attention. One of his colleagues noticed how distracted he was and offered to buy him a drink at the local bar to help him unwind. Dave almost agreed to it because his thoughts wandered to perhaps picking up someone for a one night stand but he chased those thoughts away when he started worrying about the "performance anxiety" he was having. He declined the offer and simply toughed out the rest of the day just hoping he could make it home and figure out what was wrong.

The sun was just below the horizon as Dave returned home. He stripped off his work clothes and sat around in his underwear mulling things over. He didn't want to think about it but he mentally revisited his encounter with the creature at the chemical plant. The finer details of the night were a blur but as Dave replayed the events he remembered two key things that stuck out to him. The first was that the creature intentionally planted something inside of him, down his cock, and the second was the monster's ominous parting words that it knew with certainty they'd meet again. Dave slowly came to the assumed conclusion that the reason he was unable to relieve himself was because of whatever it was the slime had left in him. That's how it knew Dave would be back, because the only way he'd be able to properly get off was with that disgusting mass of goo.

Dave's face contorted slightly in anger. He stood up from his seat and made his way back into his garage. As he went to unlock his vehicle he passed by a metal shelf of tools and grabbed the set of bolt cutters sitting on them and tossed it onto the trunk of his car. He pulled out of his garage and as he hit the street he angrily stomped on the gas pedal causing the modified engine under the hood of his car to practically scream alongside the sound of his tires spinning against the pavement before he took off.

The abandoned plant was a moderate drive away and by the time Dave arrived it was well into the night. He pulled up to the gate that ran along the border of the property and just as he assumed someone had come out here, rechained the gate, and stuck a new padlock on it. The dinosaur retrieved the bolt cutters from the trunk and snapped the fresh lock. He unraveled the chain and kicked the gate open before getting back into his car and driving further in. Dave stopped at around the same place he was a few nights earlier, turned his high beams on, and made his way out toward the dumping grounds.

"Hey!" Dave called out as he stormed through several rows of barrels. "Where the fuck are you?"

There was no answer.

The allosaur wandered around for several minutes, eventually kicking an empty drum that had fallen over causing it to make a loud metallic clang that echoed and resonated for several seconds.

"I know you're fucking out here!"

Again, no response.

Dave grunted and looked as far into the area his headlights illuminated as he could. He took a step in the opposite direction, still looking over that way, and as he turned to face where he was now headed he nearly ran into the pink slime creature from before as it had apparently snuck up on Dave and was now standing directly in front of him.

The allosaur shrieked and stumbled backwards several steps before falling onto his ass.

"I told you we'd meet again," the creature said with a grin. "Now, how about that hand?"

The pseudo-dinosaur again reached down to offer to help Dave back up and again Dave disregarded it and stood up on his own.

"Yeah, you did," Dave said with a scowl. "We have unfinished business."

"You seem, how should I put this, a little 'pent up'?" It responded, still grinning.

Dave growled in response. "What the fuck did you do to me?"

"I told you, I left you with a little something to remember me by," the monster said as it took a couple of steps toward Dave, prompting the allosaur to take the same number of steps backward.

"You've been incubating a tiny little amount of me inside of you," it continued. "It's been feeding from you. Constantly. Every single drop of your potent seed, absorbed as soon as your body produced it."

Dave continued to step away from the creature as it spoke, now backed against one of the rows of steel drums allowing the goo dinosaur to get closer to him.

"You've been... INSIDE of me?" The allosaur managed to stammer out, a fearful pit welling in his stomach.

"You and I never truly parted ways after all," the pseudo-dinosaur's face now right in Dave's.

"Just, get it out of me. Please, all of it!"

The creature smirked. Its mouth opened slightly, ropes of thick pink slime clinging to both sides of the monster's lips as it extended its tongue and ran it along Dave's cheek causing the allosaur to flinch and jerk his head away.

"Of course," the slime dinosaur said.

The creature reached one of his hands down toward the dinosaur's waist and as its fingers met the edge of his pants they liquefied and flowed down behind the fabric coating his entire crotch in the warm slime.

"O-ohh... fuck..." Dave mumbled, the dinosaur shuddering in response to the feeling of his manhood being encased in the wet goo.

"Do I need to hold you down again, or do you want to have a little more fun this time?"

"...just, let me cum. Please," Dave replied in an almost pleading tone.

The creature smiled and withdrew the slime from under Dave's jeans, its hand slowly reforming in the process. The pseudo-dinosaur undid his pants properly this time and pulled them down with his boxers. Without really thinking too much Dave followed suit and pulled his arms out from his jacket and took it off along with the shirt he was wearing under it. As his jeans hit the ground he tugged his feet out from them and kicked the clothes aside. The allosaur was already fully erect just from the brief few moments of the slime massaging him, though the persistent urge he felt to release also had something to do with his near constant state of arousal.

Dave stood there in silence for a few moments as the creature before him seemed like it was eyeing him down, taking in the sight of his reasonably well-toned figure. The dinosaur found himself doing the same now that he was able to actually get a proper look at the monster. It really did look like a person, just the same opaque shade of purple-ish pink all over instead of being scaly flesh. Dave likened it to a darker shade of a pencil eraser, that was the closest parallel he could draw. The being also didn't quite look like any specific kind of dinosaur either, it was something of a hybrid of a velociraptor and rex with maybe a couple more elements of something else mixed in. It was off putting in a difficult to describe way as it resembled something "almost familiar", but not quite. Dave's studying of the creature ended however as he glanced down toward its crotch and noticed that it was sporting an erection that was about the same size as his own. At least, it registered to Dave as an erect cock because that's what it looked like even though in actuality he knew it was just something the creature had formed with its own mass into the shape of one.

"What do you think?" The creature said once it noticed Dave's awareness. "Just right? Or bigger?"

"I uh..." The allosaur stammered. "You're gonna... use that?"

"Don't get cold feet now," it replied with a grin. "Let us not forget a few nights ago your guts were full of me and you were moaning in pleasure over it."

Dave didn't respond, his eyes just darted around as his head dipped a bit.

"That's what I thought, now lift that tail of yours."

The allosaur quietly turned his back to the pseudo-dinosaur and leaned onto one of the sealed drums in front of him, his face flushing with heat as he awkwardly arched his thick tail upward exposing himself. The pink goo stepped up behind Dave and grabbed him at the midsection of his tail and yanked it further back as it lined itself up with his tailhole and teased the dinosaur by nudging its slimy faux cock against it.

Dave shivered in response, his opening flexing as the creature brushed against it. He knew what was coming next. This wasn't him and he knew it, he wasn't into other guys, wasn't into this. The vivid memories of feeling so stretched out and blissfully full were hard to shake off however, and the dinosaur acknowledged the budding part of him that yearned to feel that again. Besides, the sentient mass of slime knocking at his back door technically wasn't male, so Dave rationalized it as okay. Granted, it wasn't female either, just that it most certainly wasn't another man that he was letting take him in this manner.

The creature pressed the tip of its shaft against Dave's pucker and pulled the allosaur backward with the grip it had on his tail. The gooey organ was firm, but still pliable enough to shift a little bit as the dinosaur's almost virgin hole slowly started to open back up to accept it. Dave gritted his teeth slightly as he felt his tailhole spread open, the monster's shaft freely helping itself to his most intimate of places. Once the creature got past the initial tight ring the rest of the allosaur was easy and as the slimy cock fully breached the dinosaur he reflexively tightened up around it as the rest of it slid right inside. Dave let out a low pleasured sigh, his own erect manhood bobbing in the air in front of him each time he tightened the muscles of his ass around the creature.

"I can tell you like this," the creature said as it heard Dave's gentle moaning in response to fully hilting the pseudo-dinosaur.

Dave didn't respond. He felt his face flush with blood again; if he didn't have very dark gray skin the reaction would've been very obvious. He did like it, he just wasn't ready to admit that to himself yet.

The slime monster pulled itself back a bit and thrusted back into Dave with enough force to lightly bump the allosaur forward causing him to gasp involuntarily. The creature grinned, knowing it was right.

The pink ooze started an easy pace inside its prey and as it worked itself into Dave its tail gradually contorted and elongated, extending out from around behind it and snaking around the side and under the dinosaur. Much like before the end of the tentacle opened up as it neared the allosaur's shaft and slowly started taking it inside. As Dave felt the tentacle slide across the head of his shaft he glanced down to watch as the goo worked its way down his entire length like an impossibly skin tight sleeve. The allosaur moaned, his body shuddering in response to the feeling of the slime tightly wrapping around his cock and starting its rhythmic milking motions. With the tentacle now practically sucking him off Dave's lust continued to build and he found himself pushing back against the pseudo-dinosaur in pace with its thrusts.

"Can you... go bigger?" Dave asked over his shoulder sheepishly.

"Hmm? What was that?" The monster asked, just to hear the allosaur say it again.

"Bigger," The dinosaur repeated a little bit louder. "...can you make yourself bigger?"

The goo creature smirked, but didn't say anything back. As it continued to ram its shaft into Dave however the allosaur began to feel his tailhole start to spread open even further. It wasn't anything outrageous, just a size more akin to a generously endowed guy, but for someone as inexperienced as Dave it was enough to really get him going. He could feel the head of the creature's thick maleness press and knead against his prostate with every pass it made, each one sending a small rush of pleasure through the dinosaur that only increased in intensity as the ooze's shaft thickened inside of him.

"F-fuck... just like that..." Dave managed to mutter out between moans.

The allosaur arched his back a little bit and leaned up against the creature's chest who responded by moving its hands up to caress the dinosaur's bare chest sensing what was to come next.

"I'm about to..." the dinosaur said mid-exhale.

Dave's voice trailed off and spiked with a sharp moan as he reached orgasm. He felt his cock throb powerfully inside the sleeve of goo and a grin flashed across his face as he finally felt a rush of cum launch from its tip into the slimy mass. The allosaur assumed it to be cum though if he were able to see it he'd have realized that every pulse of his shaft released a jet of thick pink slime, the "parting gift" that the organism had planted inside of him finally returning to the host body. The days that the ooze spent inside of the allosaur nourishing itself on his seed had turned it into a gooey nutrient-rich slurry many times more potent than even the prolonged feeding session from the dinosaur's first encounter with the monster. Of course, Dave knew none of this; to him it just felt like he'd released the biggest load he'd ever experienced after days of being pent up without relief.

The tentacle around Dave's cock milked him through his climax so well that he was dry firing several times by the end of it. The allosaur trembled quietly as he allowed himself to simply be held by the goo creature who slowly ran its hands down the front of his body.

"You taste amazing," the creature said into the dinosaur's ear before slowly running its tongue along the side of his neck.

As the monster's hands slid down Dave's body one of them wrapped around his still erect cock and gave it a few gentle strokes.

"You're still rock hard?" It said with a smile.

Dave sighed and chuckled lightly in response.

"It's too bad you're dry, that can be helped though..."

As the pseudo-dinosaur spoke the index finger on its hand slowly extended and coiled around Dave's shaft until it reached its tip where it then began to liquefy, the goo pushing down into the allosaur's urethra.

"Wait... no," Dave mumbled out as he felt the slime push into his manhood. "Not again, I promise I'll come back here. Just... don't inject me again, please..."

The slime creature smirked at the dinosaur's pleading initially but after a few seconds the tendril snaking its way down into the allosaur stopped moving.

"Would you do something else for me then?" It asked.

"What?"

"Let me feel one of your orgasms," it replied after seeming to think for a few moments.

"...what? How?" Dave answered, puzzled. "Didn't you feel it a couple minutes ago?"

"Pleasure is... complicated for me," the gooey mass started. "I certainly feel something approaching it when I feed, but the way you and the others act as you release your seed suggests you are feeling something many magnitudes greater than I. The moaning. The trembling. The release. I want to know what that moment feels like."

"But how do I help with that?"

"Let me tap into your body as you peak."

Dave paused. "Will it hurt?" He asked nervously.

"Not at all," the monster assured with a grin.

Dave knew from what little experience he had with this beast that the grin usually implied an ulterior motive, but he absolutely didn't want to go through the frustration that came with not being able to relieve himself sexually.

"O-okay, sure," Dave eventually replied.

"Good," the pseudo-dinosaur said, holding that same grin.

The creature ran its free hand a little ways back up Dave's body while its prehensile tail wrapped around both of them like a snake to hold the allosaur tightly. The gooey dinosaur's form shifted a bit as some of its body melted to cover Dave's back, several thinner tendrils reaching forward over his shoulders. One of them split off from the rest and eased itself up the dinosaur's neck before finding the small hole of his ear and slipping inside of it. Dave's eyes immediately shot open as he felt the tendril creep into the side of his head. He knew he was right to be suspicious of the offer. The allosaur panicked visibly and briefly fought against the creature's massive tail but the effort didn't last long.

A few seconds into the struggle Dave felt a sharp pinch inside of his head and he instantly fell limp in the monster's grip, his whole body numb and his eyes having noticeably rolled back and lidded. The thin tendril of slime had wormed its way through the dinosaur's ear and reached his brain. The end of the tendril branched out into a fan of nearly microscopic smaller feelers that proceeded to all make contact with the organ and merge with its flesh.

Some time passed, only a few minutes but to Dave it could've been any length. The dinosaur stirred as he slowly regained consciousness finding himself to still be in the warm slimy embrace of the goo creature. The dinosaur's head throbbed with a very light dull pain as his senses returned to him.

"How do you feel?" The monster asked.

Dave groaned audibly. He was about to reply until he realized that he heard the pseudo-dinosaur speak... but didn't actually hear it "speak". The voice seemed to have come from inside of him somehow and was much more verbose and lacking the raspiness of how it usually sounded. As the allosaur slowly came to he noticed he didn't actually hear anything at all, it was like he thought it... but did so in the tone of voice as the beast holding him.

"...I feel... kind of weird... dizzy..." the dinosaur said between breaths.

As Dave struggled to wake back up he became acutely aware of the feeling of something warm and thick buried in his right ear. He winced momentarily at the slight discomfort.

"You're... you're in my head...?" He muttered out.

"I am," the creature responded, its voice just as crystal clear as it was a few moments prior.

"I won't hurt you," it reassured.

As the pseudo-dinosaur spoke its right hand, which was still holding onto Dave's cock at its base, began to slowly stroke his length bringing the allosaur back to full arousal in mere seconds.

"I just want to know what this feels like," the monster continued.

Dave sighed lightly and squirmed a bit in the ooze's tight grasp. The dinosaur's cock throbbed as the slimy hand ran along his flesh, little tingles of pleasure arcing up his spine and causing him to shudder. The goo creature's mass quivered slightly in response as well as the entity also felt those same little jolts for the first time.

"Interesting... does it always feel like this?" It asked.

The allosaur chuckled a couple of times as he shifted his posture. "Yeah..." he said with a smile.

"And this?" The creature asked as it thrusted its lower mass forward, burying its thick gooey shaft several inches deeper into the dinosaur.

Dave cried out as he arched his back against the slime that was holding him clenching his tailhole slightly at the sudden movement of the organ that was still inside of him pushing further in.

The pink ooze relished in the strange new sensations it was pulling from the allosaur's mind, though as it began another round of pumping into him it also began picking up fragments and traces of thoughts that were mixed in with the raw physical pleasure.

"Are you... ashamed? Of this?" The monster asked.

Dave didn't respond but he could feel his face starting to get hot again, a curious new feeling that the pseudo-dinosaur started picking up.

"You were so confident in your love of the female form weren't you?"

Again, the dinosaur didn't respond even though the creature's taunting was at the forefront of his mind because it was literally filling it.

"And yet here you are, getting fucked in the ass because it's the greatest pleasure you've ever felt."

Dave bit his lower lip and whimpered slightly, not wanting to admit to himself that the goo was right. He quickly realized however that even if he tried to force the thoughts down the pink tendrils probing into his brain would've sensed them anyways simply by virtue of the thoughts manifesting for even a fraction of a second. He knew it, and so did the creature.

"You're getting close, I can tell," the monster's voice boomed. "I can feel it."

The allosaur moaned slightly as he bucked his hips forward a few times.

"Go on, show me," it commanded.

Dave's body tensed up briefly as he felt the familiar tingling rush of orgasm wash over him. His cock pulsed and throbbed in the slime's hand who continued to stroke him off at the same pace of his rhythmic flexing. Nothing came out of course considering only a few minutes earlier the allosaur shot out the several loads' worth of slime that had been nursing on his seed leaving him completely empty, but even through the dry firing the climax was just as intense. The combination of the creature's expert milking pace, the non-stop deep pounding in his backside, and perhaps even its current direct connection with his mind served to prolong Dave's peak longer than he could remember experiencing.

The allosaur writhed in the slime's grip as it carried him through his second climax of the night until it eventually began to taper off. Dave stood motionless, resting backward a little bit into the arms of the creature embracing him. He rumbled slightly, even murring a bit too as he inhaled deeply to try and catch his breath.

"...what's this?" The creature asked, now sensing the low radiating warmth clouding the dinosaur's mind.

"It's called... afterglow?" Dave finally spoke. "It's a bonding thing, I think?"

"It's... strange."

The pseudo-dinosaur let go of the allosaur's softening cock and also unwound its thick gooey tail from around both of their bodies. With Dave only being loosely held onto by the goo creature's arms he was able to shift and turn himself around to face the ooze, its firm cock-shaped tentacle pulling out of him with a soft "pop". The allosaur softly wrapped his arms around the back of the pseudo-dinosaur and held him for a moment.

"What are you doing?" It asked.

Dave moved his head in such a way to line the front of his snout up with the slime's and prodded its snout with his. Still connected to the dinosaur's mind, the creature opened its maw as Dave opened his. The allosaur slipped his tongue into the monster's mouth and briefly wrapped it around the slippery mass the creature had formed as its tongue before withdrawing it back into his mouth.

"I don't know," Dave replied.

The allosaur winced suddenly as he felt a very brief sting on the side of his face followed by a dull pop as the tendril nestled in his ear pulled itself out of his head. He blinked a couple of times and shook his head to stave off the sudden dizziness that hit him.

"That was... more intimate than I was expecting it to be," the creature said, Dave now physically hearing it speak with its raspy voice again.

There was a noticeable pause where neither spoke.

"Thank you," it added.

"I'll be back soon, to feed you again," Dave said with a grin.

The creature flashed a grin of its own back.

"I look forward to it," it replied before turning away from the allosaur.

Dave watched for a few moments as the organism retreated back into the seemingly endless maze of steel drums. The allosaur collected his clothes from the ground and started putting them back on, stepping into his pants where he was standing and then putting his shirt and jacket back on as he made his way back to his car.

He sighed as he tiredly plopped down into the driver's seat and turned the key in the ignition. The lights on the dashboard console flickered on along with the radio hopping into the middle of a classic rock song Dave knew by heart. He adjusted his rearview mirror a bit as he smiled to himself, kicked the transmission into "D", and drove off.

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